luanbr
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Post by luanbr on Sept 12, 2017 16:00:19 GMT -2
Could you please correct this?
I'd like to talk about Narcos. In this last week I had finished the thrid season. I'm a really impressed about that serie, that was a such great serie, really. I have to admit I missed Wagner Moura in that season, cause he was great in first and second season, but there were other great actors, too. On and off, when I was watching it, I used to stop that to looking for the real characters. In that season, he talked about Callí Cartel, one of the biggest Cocaine producers of the world. It's so hard to believe that everything told is really. I'm kind of sad, cause I have to wait until next year to see the fourth season, but I think it will worth.
You otta see that serie.
Now I'm looking forward to seeing the next season of Stranger Things, I love it too.
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Post by michaelkylow on Oct 14, 2017 9:11:15 GMT -2
Não use abreviações se quiser denotar mais formalidade, eu reescreveria assim:
I would like to talk about Narcos. Last week, I finished watching third season; I am really impressed about this series (não existe ''serie''!), which is (prefira ''is'' porque a série ainda não acabou; ''was'' implica que a série acabou, e, por isso, ''era'' uma ótima série) such a great series, really. I have to admit that I missed Wagner Moura in this season, because he was great in first and second seasons, but there were other great actors too. On and off, while I was watching it, I would pause (penso que ''stop'' está inadequado, se quis usar no sentido de ''parar'', ''pausar'') it to look for the real characters. In this season, he spoke (eu usaria ''speak'', em vez de ''talk'' ) about Callí Cartel, one of the greatest (procure no Google a respeito de quando usar ''great'' e ''big'') cocaine (inicial minúscula: é um substantivo comum) producers of the world. It is so hard to believe everything that was shown is real (''really'' significa ''realmente'', penso que você quis dizer ''real'', cuidado). I am kind of sad, because I have to wait until next year to watch (quando se falar de assistir a alguma série, filme etc., prefira sempre ''watch'', com o tempo, vai conseguir identificar em que contextos utilizar ''see'', ''watch'' e ''look'') it, but I think it will be worth it (a expressão é ''to be worth it'').
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I would like to talk about Narcos. Last week, I finished watching third season; I am really impressed about this series, which is such a great series, really. I have to admit that I missed Wagner Moura in this season, because he was great in first and second seasons, but there were other great actors too. On and off, while I was watching it, I would pause it to look for the real characters. In this season, he spoke about Callí Cartel, one of the greatest cocaine producers of the world. It is so hard to believe everything that was shown is real. I am kind of sad, because I have to wait until next year to watch it, but I think it will be worth it.
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